Divine Judgement

Hi!

Today, it’s time for yet another one of my ultra short stories namely micro/flash fiction, of which I have written three previously. Find the link to those right below!

The walk

Crossroads

Coming full circle

Now let’s get rolling with our day’s work!

Divine Judgement

A cream coloured Mercedes Benz taxi parked at the curb

The bird’s dropping on the bonnet of his Mercedes couldn’t help but bring an expression of mild amusement on his face. For it bore testimony to the fact that His judgement befell equally on everyone. It really didn’t matter whether one owned a modest minivan or an extravagant Ferrari. The rules were the same.

Bird’s shit remained bird’s shit.

Word Count:- 59

65 Comments Add yours

  1. Tom Burton says:

    Lovely short story, with a great message! 🙂

    Liked by 4 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot, Tom! 😀

      Like

  2. Shelley says:

    LOL – that is so very true! I love it!

    Liked by 4 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thank you so much Shelley! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Shelley says:

        You’re welcome!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. floatinggold says:

    That was too funny/ A great message.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot! 😊

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  4. LOL . No reason to sugar coat it.

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    1. The Pensieve says:

      I guess😅 Honestly I have just tried to convey the story in as few yet as impactful a way as possible…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You did it successfully.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. The Pensieve says:

          Thanks a lot! 😊

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  5. Rashi Singh says:

    The last line.😂
    On a serious note, great message.👏

    Liked by 3 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks again sis! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Winnie says:

    Wonderful story! I love the message it conveyed. 😊

    Liked by 4 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thank you Winnie! 😊

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome!

        Liked by 2 people

  7. Anand Bose says:

    Very cute irony Anand Bose from Kerala

    Liked by 4 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot for your feedback Anand!😊

      Liked by 1 person

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    Liked by 3 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      I am really glad to hear that. Thank you! 😊

      Like

  9. PatrickClelp says:

    Appreciate it. Ample content.

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  10. PatrickClelp says:

    Thanks a lot, Numerous posts!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Nice of you to say that, pal!✌️

      Like

  11. mydreamality says:

    Exactly!!!

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  12. WillardHon says:

    You actually mentioned that superbly!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot, Pal! ✌️

      Like

  13. WillardHon says:

    Really loads of good facts!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Kennethgorry says:

    Beneficial advice. With thanks!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      You are welcome! 😁

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  15. DanielCek says:

    You expressed that wonderfully! acyclovir cream

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    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thank you! 😊

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  16. johnlmalone says:

    nicely succinct BUT I still get pissed off when birds shit on my cAr 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Yeah, me too! 😂😂

      Liked by 1 person

  17. henhouselady says:

    I love this. There is a great truth here. Bird shit falls on the just and the injust.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Yup. Justice makes us all equal.

      Thanks a lot for posting your valuable feedback!

      Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️

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  18. Absolutely true 👍🏻

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    1. Thanks a lot for your feedback, Radhika! 😊✌️

      Like

  19. markbierman says:

    In the end, we are all just flesh and blood.

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    1. Amen 🙏

      Thanks a lot for stopping by, Mark! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  20. Yes. If we have sown shit, it must come to us. What a nice way to put it.

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    1. Yes indeed.

      Thanks a lot for being such a faithful reader, Parneet! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  21. Loku says:

    I enjoyed it .😆😆😆

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    1. Thanks a lot Loku! 😅😊

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  22. Paschal M says:

    Wow…love the last 2 lines most!

    For nature everyone is equal and one, the only disparity, we the humans created ourselves.

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    1. Yup, exactly! We will all be judged equally in it’s eyes, no matter what.

      Thanks a lot for stopping by!

      Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  23. …but the Mercedes owner will take it for wash before any other does – just my thoughts!

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    1. 😂😂 Yeah, guess he will! Thanks a lot for stopping by! 😊

      Like

  24. Vivek Sharma says:

    Bird’s shit :-)) loved the way you wrote this

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    1. 😅😂 Thanks a lot for stopping by, Vivek!

      Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️

      Liked by 1 person

  25. rosidabegum says:

    Love this story and message 😇😊

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you so much Rosida! 😁

      Like

  26. Kally says:

    I think it is superbly written.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much Kally! 😊

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  27. denise421win says:

    Awesome… a good lesson to learn

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    1. Thank you Denise! 😊

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  28. Lovely message…loved it

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    1. Thanks a lot Janhavi! 😊

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      1. Truly my pleasure! You are welcome!!😊

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