Hi!
Today, it’s time for yet another one of my ultra short stories namely micro/flash fiction, of which I have written three previously. Find the link to those right below!
Now let’s get rolling with our day’s work!
Divine Judgement
The bird’s dropping on the bonnet of his Mercedes couldn’t help but bring an expression of mild amusement on his face. For it bore testimony to the fact that His judgement befell equally on everyone. It really didn’t matter whether one owned a modest minivan or an extravagant Ferrari. The rules were the same.
Bird’s shit remained bird’s shit.
Word Count:- 59
Lovely short story, with a great message! 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Tom! 😀
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LOL – that is so very true! I love it!
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Thank you so much Shelley! 😀
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You’re welcome!
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That was too funny/ A great message.
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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LOL . No reason to sugar coat it.
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I guess😅 Honestly I have just tried to convey the story in as few yet as impactful a way as possible…
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You did it successfully.
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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The last line.😂
On a serious note, great message.👏
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Thanks again sis! 😊
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Wonderful story! I love the message it conveyed. 😊
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Thank you Winnie! 😊
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You’re welcome!
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Very cute irony Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks a lot for your feedback Anand!😊
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What i do not realize is in actuality how you are not really far more neatly-preferred than you could be now. You are so clever. You already know thus significantly within the case of this topic, Your own stuffs outstanding. All the time take care of it up!
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I am really glad to hear that. Thank you! 😊
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Appreciate it. Ample content.
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Thank you! 😊
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Thanks a lot, Numerous posts!
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Nice of you to say that, pal!✌️
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Exactly!!!
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Thanks! 😁
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You actually mentioned that superbly!
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Thanks a lot, Pal! ✌️
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Really loads of good facts!
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Thank you! 😊
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Beneficial advice. With thanks!
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You are welcome! 😁
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You expressed that wonderfully! acyclovir cream
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Thank you! 😊
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nicely succinct BUT I still get pissed off when birds shit on my cAr 🙂
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Yeah, me too! 😂😂
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I love this. There is a great truth here. Bird shit falls on the just and the injust.
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Yup. Justice makes us all equal.
Thanks a lot for posting your valuable feedback!
Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️
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Absolutely true 👍🏻
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Thanks a lot for your feedback, Radhika! 😊✌️
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In the end, we are all just flesh and blood.
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Amen 🙏
Thanks a lot for stopping by, Mark! 😊
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Yes. If we have sown shit, it must come to us. What a nice way to put it.
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Yes indeed.
Thanks a lot for being such a faithful reader, Parneet! 😊
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I enjoyed it .😆😆😆
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Thanks a lot Loku! 😅😊
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Wow…love the last 2 lines most!
For nature everyone is equal and one, the only disparity, we the humans created ourselves.
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Yup, exactly! We will all be judged equally in it’s eyes, no matter what.
Thanks a lot for stopping by!
Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊
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As always
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…but the Mercedes owner will take it for wash before any other does – just my thoughts!
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😂😂 Yeah, guess he will! Thanks a lot for stopping by! 😊
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Bird’s shit :-)) loved the way you wrote this
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😅😂 Thanks a lot for stopping by, Vivek!
Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️
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Love this story and message 😇😊
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Thank you so much Rosida! 😁
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I think it is superbly written.
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Thank you so much Kally! 😊
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Awesome… a good lesson to learn
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Thank you Denise! 😊
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Good piece!
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Thank you! 😊
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Lovely message…loved it
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Thanks a lot Janhavi! 😊
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Truly my pleasure! You are welcome!!😊
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This conveys an important message in funny and interesting way. I love it.👌
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Thanks a lot for your feedback, Florence! 😊
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