Divine Judgement

February 13, 2021 58 Comments

Hi!

Today, it’s time for yet another one of my ultra short stories namely micro/flash fiction, of which I have written three previously. Find the link to those right below!

The walk

Crossroads

Coming full circle

Now let’s get rolling with our day’s work!

Divine Judgement

The bird’s dropping on the bonnet of his Mercedes couldn’t help but bring an expression of mild amusement on his face. For it bore testimony to the fact that His judgement befell equally on everyone. It really didn’t matter whether one owned a modest minivan or an extravagant Ferrari. The rules were the same.

Bird’s shit remained bird’s shit.

Word Count:- 59

Creative writing, Flash fiction, Introspection Analogy, day of reckoning, divine, His wish He rules, judgement day, Life, Metaphor, micro fiction, Philosophy, Thought, Twitterature

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Tom Burton
July 10, 2019 at 1:59 am Reply

Lovely short story, with a great message! 🙂

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- The Pensieve
  July 10, 2019 at 7:17 am Reply
  
  Thanks a lot, Tom! 😀
  
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Shelley
July 11, 2019 at 4:21 pm Reply

LOL – that is so very true! I love it!

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- The Pensieve
  July 11, 2019 at 5:37 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so much Shelley! 😀
  
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  - Shelley
    July 11, 2019 at 5:38 pm Reply
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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floatinggold
July 11, 2019 at 7:05 pm Reply

That was too funny/ A great message.

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- The Pensieve
  July 11, 2019 at 9:08 pm Reply
  
  Thanks a lot! 😊
  
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thelonelyauthorblog
July 11, 2019 at 9:04 pm Reply

LOL . No reason to sugar coat it.

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- The Pensieve
  July 11, 2019 at 9:10 pm Reply
  
  I guess😅 Honestly I have just tried to convey the story in as few yet as impactful a way as possible…
  
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  - thelonelyauthorblog
    July 11, 2019 at 9:21 pm Reply
    
    You did it successfully.
    
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    - The Pensieve
      July 11, 2019 at 9:23 pm Reply
      
      Thanks a lot! 😊
      
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Rashi Singh
July 12, 2019 at 8:25 pm Reply

The last line.😂
On a serious note, great message.👏

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- The Pensieve
  July 12, 2019 at 10:39 pm Reply
  
  Thanks again sis! 😊
  
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Winnie
July 15, 2019 at 9:01 am Reply

Wonderful story! I love the message it conveyed. 😊

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- The Pensieve
  July 15, 2019 at 10:03 am Reply
  
  Thank you Winnie! 😊
  
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  - Winnie
    July 15, 2019 at 8:41 pm Reply
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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Anand Bose
August 9, 2019 at 5:24 pm Reply

Very cute irony Anand Bose from Kerala

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- The Pensieve
  August 9, 2019 at 6:38 pm Reply
  
  Thanks a lot for your feedback Anand!😊
  
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September 12, 2019 at 5:14 pm Reply

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- The Pensieve
  September 15, 2019 at 10:04 pm Reply
  
  I am really glad to hear that. Thank you! 😊
  
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PatrickClelp
September 27, 2019 at 4:27 am Reply

Appreciate it. Ample content.

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- The Pensieve
  September 28, 2019 at 5:45 pm Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
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PatrickClelp
September 28, 2019 at 5:36 pm Reply

Thanks a lot, Numerous posts!

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- The Pensieve
  September 28, 2019 at 5:46 pm Reply
  
  Nice of you to say that, pal!✌️
  
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mydreamality
October 20, 2019 at 4:35 pm Reply

Exactly!!!

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- The Pensieve
  October 20, 2019 at 6:54 pm Reply
  
  Thanks! 😁
  
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WillardHon
November 2, 2019 at 1:54 pm Reply

You actually mentioned that superbly!

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- The Pensieve
  November 4, 2019 at 8:32 pm Reply
  
  Thanks a lot, Pal! ✌️
  
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WillardHon
November 3, 2019 at 12:36 pm Reply

Really loads of good facts!

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- The Pensieve
  November 4, 2019 at 8:33 pm Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
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Kennethgorry
November 6, 2019 at 4:29 am Reply

Beneficial advice. With thanks!

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- The Pensieve
  November 6, 2019 at 10:16 am Reply
  
  You are welcome! 😁
  
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DanielCek
February 15, 2020 at 10:27 pm Reply

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- The Pensieve
  March 1, 2020 at 9:17 am Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
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johnlmalone
June 3, 2020 at 11:38 am Reply

nicely succinct BUT I still get pissed off when birds shit on my cAr 🙂

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- The Pensieve
  June 3, 2020 at 2:26 pm Reply
  
  Yeah, me too! 😂😂
  
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henhouselady
February 13, 2021 at 2:09 am Reply

I love this. There is a great truth here. Bird shit falls on the just and the injust.

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 14, 2021 at 9:49 am Reply
  
  Yup. Justice makes us all equal.
  
  Thanks a lot for posting your valuable feedback!
  
  Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️
  
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radhikasreflection
February 13, 2021 at 12:34 pm Reply

Absolutely true 👍🏻

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 13, 2021 at 8:30 pm Reply
  
  Thanks a lot for your feedback, Radhika! 😊✌️
  
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markbierman
February 14, 2021 at 1:28 am Reply

In the end, we are all just flesh and blood.

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 14, 2021 at 9:49 am Reply
  
  Amen 🙏
  
  Thanks a lot for stopping by, Mark! 😊
  
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parneetsachdev
February 14, 2021 at 8:00 am Reply

Yes. If we have sown shit, it must come to us. What a nice way to put it.

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 14, 2021 at 12:39 pm Reply
  
  Yes indeed.
  
  Thanks a lot for being such a faithful reader, Parneet! 😊
  
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Loku
February 14, 2021 at 9:28 am Reply

I enjoyed it .😆😆😆

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 22, 2021 at 8:29 pm Reply
  
  Thanks a lot Loku! 😅😊
  
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Paschal M
February 15, 2021 at 3:05 pm Reply

Wow…love the last 2 lines most!

For nature everyone is equal and one, the only disparity, we the humans created ourselves.

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 15, 2021 at 8:31 pm Reply
  
  Yup, exactly! We will all be judged equally in it’s eyes, no matter what.
  
  Thanks a lot for stopping by!
  
  Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊
  
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  - Paschal M
    February 15, 2021 at 9:39 pm Reply
    
    As always
    
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Train Today to Reap Tomorrow
February 18, 2021 at 9:16 am Reply

…but the Mercedes owner will take it for wash before any other does – just my thoughts!

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 19, 2021 at 8:07 am Reply
  
  😂😂 Yeah, guess he will! Thanks a lot for stopping by! 😊
  
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Vivek Sharma
February 19, 2021 at 9:31 am Reply

Bird’s shit :-)) loved the way you wrote this

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  February 21, 2021 at 1:05 pm Reply
  
  😅😂 Thanks a lot for stopping by, Vivek!
  
  Stay safe and stay tuned! 😊✌️
  
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rosidabegum
February 21, 2021 at 1:12 pm Reply

Love this story and message 😇😊

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  April 4, 2021 at 7:17 am Reply
  
  Thank you so much Rosida! 😁
  
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Kally
March 5, 2021 at 8:11 am Reply

I think it is superbly written.

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- Dr. Soumitra Patil
  March 20, 2021 at 11:30 am Reply
  
  Thank you so much Kally! 😊
  
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